This was a video feedback session, see written feedback which followed:

Actions suggested by Tutor

• Ensure I show my reflections on how my aims have been/will be met -Done
• Update my aims and objectives – Done
• Show how I’ve engaged with and used the Photography online ethics resources – Done
• Include wider context around my work- Done
• Be aware of learning outcomes- Yes
• Give evidence- Done
• How will I use my learning from the resolved project – Developed
• Can include hyperlinks in the proposal – Done
• Give links to my previous work alluded to – Done
• Reconsider showing my work locally : Since April 2024 my thoughts about sharing my work have developed. I was initially concerned about sharing my work locally, however by November 2024 I moved to a position where I was holding artist talks withing the woodland with the book. Initial feedback from attendees is that the book has a theme that extends outside of the locality; this encourages me to continue the talks and to consider expanding them.

I have since updated and revised my project proposal (Nov 2024) taking on board the above advice and later learning. It was interesting to reflect now against my original proposal written in April 24. See: https://nkssite6.photo.blog/category/body-of-work/bow-assignments/assignment-2/a2-draft-project-resolution-proposal/