REFLECTIONS AGAINST FORMATIVE FEEDBACK

This was written feedback from my cover Tutor:

My Tutor’s feedback was very complimentary about the scope and presentation of my project/analytical text “sound account of self publishing…very detailed with excellent research and bibliography” (Clarkson, 2024:2)

He suggested some useful actions:

• Add in reading of Bruno Caschel’s Self Publish Be Happy. I was not aware of this book, only his website and movement -Done
• Reduce to below the 2000 word count by shaving the intro – Done (and reduced elsewhere by summarising and editing)
• Mention in introduction that I have conducted primary research and point to the summaries in the appendix – Done
• Use some bullet points instead of paragraphs/sentences in places to make it easier for the general reader and emphasise my reflections/findings – Done
• Reverse engineer:

All of these revisions definitely aids readability and brings more clarity to my analysis